3句英文,请帮我看看哪里可以改改的
3句英文,请帮我看看哪里可以改改的
-Secondly,a reasonable timetable is also important for employee’s health.
-Many employers turned down the suggestion of shorter hours to maximumtheir benefit .
-As a result,generally,a maximum 8 hours in a day and 40 hours in a week are not just functions for the individual,but also for the company.
-翻院（求连贯简洁,大意：某些医生等职业可能必须要加班,这样的话,他们应该在之后享有足够的休息时间来平衡）
第二点,一个合理的时间安排对于员工的健康同样是很重要的
很多员工拒绝减少他们的工作时间以便获得最大的利益
总的来说,每天最多8个小时和一个星期40个小时的工作时间对于不仅个人,还是公司来说都是最有效率的.不是啊,前面3句改错，最后一句翻译成英语.-Secondly,a reasonable timetable is also important for employee’s healths.-Many employees ignore the suggestions of shorter hours of working in order to maximize their benefits.-However, maximum 8 hours a day and 40 hours a week for working is not only the efficientest arrangement for employees, but also for companies.-Moreover, some careers like doctors may work overtime depend on their jobs. As a result, people who work in those jobs should get extra time to rest to balance their overtiming working.不好意思刚没看好问题.第一个句子的employee's 那里应该再改成employees'现在才看到不好意思