请会英语的高手,帮我看看这篇自我介绍有没有语法或单词错误,有的话帮我改改..再帮我润色一下

请会英语的高手,帮我看看这篇自我介绍有没有语法或单词错误,有的话帮我改改..再帮我润色一下
帮我把这段翻译一下并加进去：在上六年级的时候,我的父亲为了提高我的英语口语水平,让我每个星期六看一部外国英文的经典影片,我还记得我看的第一部影片,叫做《ET》 我的这个习惯一直到现在都没有改变.
Hello everyone!It's my honor to introduce myself to you.I'm Wang Siyi,I come from Zao zhuang Tai er zhuang.I have spent 12 years in my life.
I’m open minded,easy-going,warm hearted with a sunshine smile.Also,I much enjoy making friends from all walks of life..
I'm very happy to take part in this compition.Of course I'm a little nervous.
I was gread 3 at the age of 7.That time my English is very very bad.I couldn't say out Twenty-six English letters .and it lasted Gread 5,after an exam ,my parents asked me to learn my test books of Gread 3 4 5,so my English became better.If this is not the case,I will not take part in the compition.
I paly dulcimer about four years ,and I Learning Latin dance about three years.I think it’s one of the most beautiful things all over the word.
I admire many Europe and the United States stars ,For example justin bieber ,Avril ,lady gaga .many people is very Surprised when they heard i like lady gaga .they don't like her Costume.but i don't think so.she has her special style.I love her music.
I like reading very much.My favorite writer is jiangnan And now I am reading a book called I keep reading half an hour every day.
i think english is the most beautiful language not include Chinese .Like a biautiful song .My dream is going to be a Diplomat.\x05
My speech is over ,I hope you will like me ,thanks.
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