请帮我看看这句英文中有没有语法错误或者修改得更地道It's time to goodbye to you ,goodbye my love ,goodbye my long long journery five months ago.中文:是时候对你说再见了 我爱的人 我那五月前的爱情之旅..

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请帮我看看这句英文中有没有语法错误或者修改得更地道
It's time to goodbye to you ,goodbye my love ,goodbye my long long journery five months ago.
中文:是时候对你说再见了 我爱的人 我那五月前的爱情之旅..

有。宾语从句中没有谓语动词
改:
It's time to say goodbye to you.......

It's time to say goodbye to you ,to my love,and my long long journery five months ago

It's time to say goodbye to you
goodbye,my love
goodbye,my long long love-journey of five months.
这样就差不多了 journey拼写错了