写给教授的一封英文信 请帮我看看

写给教授的一封英文信 请帮我看看
Prof.Lamb
I’m a college student in South China Normal University,major in psychology.As yearning towards the top-class education in Cambridge,I do hope to be a postgraduate student in your department in the next year.
My current GPA is about 3.2.And I have some volunteer experiences which related with psychology also with some research experiences.The highest honor is University Scholarship.My IELTS score have not come out yet.
I’m wondering am I suitable for the MPhil in Social and Developmental Psychology course?
Thanks for your time.I am looking forward your reply.
Sincerely yours,XXX