请帮我看看我这句英文有语法上的错吗?

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请帮我看看我这句英文有语法上的错吗?
Kindly please reference to the following mail and please advise about your area of expertise,thanks.
背景是之前有一封电邮发给我的老板询问他行业里的专长.但是他没有回复,所以别人发给我让我催我老板,我写了这段话请我老板回复.请问我这样写对吗?
Please kindly refer to the following mail and inform me of your area of expertise.Thank you.
这样可以吗?

Please kindly refer to the following mail and inform us of your area of expertise.Thank you.