一句话英语翻译,句子结构貌似有问题
问题描述：
一句话英语翻译,句子结构貌似有问题
将“融聚人才,领先技术,创造出高品质的产品和服务,为人类进步做出贡献.”翻译成
“we gather all talents to
develop world leading technology and provide high quality products and services,
making contributions to human progress.”正确吗?后面的making的应用是不是有问题?但是改为”to make"感觉句子又变得冗余有歧义.各位有何高见?
答
我觉得这样翻译更恰当.
融聚人才,领先技术,创造出高品质的产品和服务,为人类进步做出贡献.
We gather talented people to develop world leading technology,provide high quality products and services,and contribute to the progress of mankind.
① Talents 改为 talented people
② and provide 改为 provide
③ 直接去掉 making,把 contributions 改为 to contribute 即可.
♥ 自己认真回答的,应该是正确的,