求英语高手帮我看看这篇作文有没有语法上的错误.

问题描述:

求英语高手帮我看看这篇作文有没有语法上的错误.
My School Life
I have many classes in our school,English,math,Chinese,art and more.My favorite subject is music.Because I think it’s relaxing.And I also like English,because I think it’s interesting.I like English teacher best,Miss Chen.She is very funny.I don’t like science.Because I think it’s very difficult.
At school,I usually play chess with my friend,Linda.I want to join the music club.Because I can play the guitar,but I can’t play it well.So I want to learn about music.
This is my school life.I am very happy!

注意学科单词首字母大写
第一句:I have many classes in our school,such as English,Math,Chinese,Arts and etc(表示“诸如此类”“等等”的意思).
第五句:I like Miss Chen best,my English teacher,who is very funny.
倒数第四句:Because I can play the guitar,but not very well.
没什么大问题,很不错的一篇文章~轻松有趣,就是解释的理由可以更具体一些~
favorite没有错~有两种拼法都可以的~楼下不要瞎说~