可以帮我看看这篇英语小短文有语法问题吗,

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可以帮我看看这篇英语小短文有语法问题吗,
是小演讲,
Hello,everyone.Today I want to talk about this picture.This is a photo of the black children.The black children may be the poorest children in the world They don't have enough food.They can't receive a good education.They don't have even clean water to drink.But lovely smiles still on thier faces.I hope there are more kind-heart people to care for them.Let them live a better life.

"They don't have enough food.They can't receive a good education.They don't have even clean water to drink.But lovely smiles still on thier faces.I hope there are more kind-heart people to care for th...