帮我看看下面这片短文的语法有没有错误,英语大师帮帮我看看
帮我看看下面这片短文的语法有没有错误,英语大师帮帮我看看
Dear grandparents,NOV 27th 2009
First,warm wishes at Thanksgiving.
I'm sorry that I didn't say "thank you" yesterday.I was so busy yesterday.And I wish it won't be late.
why didn't you call me?You promised that you will get back to me.In the past days since you went to the US,I was always waiting for your call after the dinner while I was watching English programes.
I have already finished my middle-team exames.I did OK this time,And I also got"A"in my listening test.I can read the English book which you gave it to me without dictionaries.That's what both you and me want.I only just made it to you.
Wish you all the time
Thanks in Thanks Givingday
This letter is original just from me,so here may have some mistakes.can you help me correct them
write to me soon,I will waiting for you
语法错误太多了,刚看了几句就觉得.
感恩节快乐说Happy Thanksgiving Day就好了.
过去没说应为had not said.
You promised后边怎么能用will,还是用would吧,打电话是call back
期中考试是middle-term exams,不知道这里是不是你的笔误
which you give to me已经修饰了book,不用再加it了
你我希望的中的我是主语,怎么能用宾格me呢,want后面再加上to see好点
will后面应该用动词的普通形式
如果想表达现在在期待就写I am waiting for your reply.
这样简练一点,等着你 看起来不正规也不符合语境.
不过一个中学生写成这样很不错了已经
我不是一个专业的人员,但是英语是6级水平,只能为你做这么多了