帮我看看这段英文写的有错没~
问题描述：
帮我看看这段英文写的有错没~
Actually~I concerned about this company very early.I like JinDi chocolate very much,so I searched a lot of info.about it,and I konw it was produced by this company,Since then ,I started to concerned the company.这个公司的事迹云云~
我说的这些一般的外外能听懂吧?或者谁能给我精简精简~
我这是签证口语,问题就是“为什么想去某某公司”,我想回答的随意一点~
答
能,没什么太大问题