我写的英文有错误没?

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我写的英文有错误没?
结果表明:-100℃时石英玻璃的疲劳强度最高,20℃时的疲劳强度最低
Analysis
showed that the fatigue strength of cover glass at -100℃ was highest and that at 20℃ was lowest.

没语法错误吧,但是语序有点颠倒了.更好的写法是 Analysis showed that the fatigue strength of cover glass was highest at -100℃ and lowest at 20℃