帮我看看我写的这些有什么错误没有

问题描述:

帮我看看我写的这些有什么错误没有
crying?
not me
my tears has stem
my way is so hard
but i belive i can through it
fail?
not me
every time when i fall
my leg hasn't give in to difficulties
never
winner?
yes
i will be a success man
take my way
nomtaer what others talk!

1) my tears have
2)i can go through
3)a successful man