请帮助修改这句语法错误 急

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请帮助修改这句语法错误 急
Effective, frequent communication and collaboration among doctors and nurses is necessary for successful implementation of the ABCDE bundle into practice.
感觉有几处语法错误,请高手帮忙

Effective and frequent communication and collaboration among doctors and nurses are necessary for the successful implementation of the ABCDE bundle.
开头两个形容词用and连接;communication and collaboration已经是复数应该用are;successful implementation前面加定冠词;implementation已经是put into practice的意思,后面再加into practice属于同义反复应删除.