请帮我看一下这句话有没有语法错误,有点急~“If you like,you can take it.” He sauntered by,“This four-leaf clover can realize you four wishes,but you need to pay the heavy prices.’’我想表达的意思是“如果你喜欢,你可以拿走”他慢慢地走过来,“这个四叶草可以实现你的四个愿望,但你需要为此付出惨重的代价.”

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请帮我看一下这句话有没有语法错误,有点急~
“If you like,you can take it.” He sauntered by,“This four-leaf clover can realize you four wishes,but you need to pay the heavy prices.’’
我想表达的意思是
“如果你喜欢,你可以拿走”他慢慢地走过来,“这个四叶草可以实现你的四个愿望,但你需要为此付出惨重的代价.”

小问题;you改成your

正确

他慢慢地走过来-he walked to here slowly
saunter 是慢慢地走没错,不过是心情轻松的散步