请帮我看一下,这句英文有无语法错误

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请帮我看一下,这句英文有无语法错误
Happiness is not about being immortal nor having food or rights in one's hand.It’s about having each tiny wish come true,or having something to eat when you are hungry or having someone's love when you need love.

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汉语:
幸福,不是永垂不朽,也不是饱食终日,或者君临天下.幸福是实现每一个细小的愿望,饿的时候有口吃的,需要爱的时候有人来爱你.(本人翻译)