谁能帮看看我的文章有没有错的地方``

问题描述:

谁能帮看看我的文章有没有错的地方``
Some of our classmates are children,such as PP chong.Some boy classmates are men of weak character,and some girl classmates are women of stupid character.I hate them because they konw nothing.children are always children.
{some of our classmates' opinions are stupid}
句子没问题就OK

没问题的!只是写得怪怪的,挺好玩.