中译英 直到患了重病,他才下决心马上戒烟.he decide to stop smoking until he got bad suffer.中译英 大家帮我来看看我的翻译有没有语法错和什么可以改进的地方吧~

问题描述:

中译英 直到患了重病,他才下决心马上戒烟.
he decide to stop smoking until he got bad suffer.
中译英 大家帮我来看看我的翻译有没有语法错和什么可以改进的地方吧~

润色:
Not until he was seriously ill did he decide to stop smoking.

Not until he was badly ill was he be determined to stop smoking.

句型错了.
应该用not...until
He didn't make up his mind to give up smoking until he
had been ill seriously.

应该是didn't decide