哪位大神帮忙看看我的这篇文章的语法或者其他地方有没有问题,3Q

哪位大神帮忙看看我的这篇文章的语法或者其他地方有没有问题,3Q
Hello everyone,I am your new classmate.We can learn togher.I feel so happy.Well,my name is Weijia.As you can see,I have short hair,just like a boy.My eyes are not big enough.I guess most of you like the big.Because that looked becatiful and loveely.
My favorite color is green,it represents the youth.I like style of music is country music.So,Taylor Swift is my love.And I usually draw some cartoon characters in the boring time.
I like to make friends.I hope we can get alone happy.
Thank you for listening my self introduction.