我写的英文的自我介绍,请高手帮忙看看有没有错误的地方,

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我写的英文的自我介绍,请高手帮忙看看有没有错误的地方,
Hello,good morning.My name is Gao Yu,I'm thirteen years old.I study in Dong Guan Primary School.I'm in Grade six Class one.
I like play computer and study English very much,and I often play computer games with my classmates.Noodles is my favourite food,I think it's delicious.I like the sea very much,so I like blue,too.Because the sea is blue.My English teacher is Duan Xiaoqin,she is very friendly to us,I like her very much.
This is me,thank you!
我写的,看看有没有错误的地方,另发出来一份中文翻译,

good morning everyoneI like playing computer and learning/studying English very muchI like the blue sea very much and I like blue,too.首先想说你写的已经很好了,基本上没有什么语法错误,继续加油~大家早上...