帮我看一下这句话语法有没有错

问题描述:

帮我看一下这句话语法有没有错
Waiting,waiting,waiting...we were too tired so we said goodbye;Waiting,waiting,waiting...we were tootired so we married.

Waiting,waiting,waiting...We were too tired so we said goodbye; waiting,waiting,waiting...We were too tired so we married.
这是修改的,专业易改修改
没语法错误,就是有些格式上不规范那格式上帮我修改下修改好了呀,我是指大小写,标点已修改