请跟我改改这篇英语文章啊

请跟我改改这篇英语文章啊
这是我自己写的（我有些对些英语作文没什么自信,
With many demands of students and education,every universities set up different kinds of electives,in order to broaden students"enknowledge and improve learning.
Students choose different electives because of different reasons.Some think that different kinds of electives set up is to the benefit of broaden enknowledge,apart from that learning more electives is available to apply a job.the other think that it can make students"life more interesting.
As for me,my elective is make up.Every girl is beautiful.make up can help us improve image and make us more self-confident.Also,make up is a art.