请帮我改一下这篇英语文章,上海世博带给我许多ShangHai Expo Bring Me A LotEverybody knows the two thousand and ten Shanghai world expo held in China?It iet us know that we have lots of proble now.And it iet me know that how important to protect the enThe world expo to China promoted the economic development and promoting international cooperation,speeds up the domestic infrastructure construction,but also show oneself civilization,is a great opportunity.The world expo let me
请帮我改一下这篇英语文章,上海世博带给我许多
ShangHai Expo Bring Me A Lot
Everybody knows the two thousand and ten Shanghai world expo held in China?It iet us know that we have lots of proble now.And it iet me know that how important to protect the en
The world expo to China promoted the economic development and promoting international cooperation,speeds up the domestic infrastructure construction,but also show oneself civilization,is a great opportunity.
The world expo let me understand to how can we get the environment
We should spitting,no littering rubbish,be a good citizen.
Let us work together,make the city more beautiful
Thank you listen to me
首先 第一句中的“bring ” 要改成“brings”用 第三人称第二,“two thousand and ten Shanghai ”可以直接用阿拉伯数字 没有外国人会写一大长串的哦 直接2010就行了第三,第二行中“Shanghai world expo held in Ch...