急,请看我写的这句话有没有时态的错误?

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急,请看我写的这句话有没有时态的错误?
Do you have something want to tell me?
Leave a messge,please.
I'll reply as soon as possible.
我拿不定...我语法不好.

do you have something to tell me?
不过native speakers一般不会这么问哦
应该是what do you want to tell me?