请英语大神帮忙看看我写的这篇英语作文,看看有没有语法错误.比较重要 Helping others is important for us.There are lots of people in my life who love to hel

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请英语大神帮忙看看我写的这篇英语作文,看看有没有语法错误.比较重要 Helping others is important for us.There are lots of people in my life who love to help others.Some of them are my claamates .Such as LiLei ,Han Mei ,Lin Tao and so on .Lei Lei always helps the people in trouble .HanMei is a good student in my class ,so she often helps other students with their studies.LinTao usually makes our school beautiful .We should learn from them .So I decide to learn from them from now on.I hope everyone would learn from them.Let's make the world more beautiful

没有,很棒啊