我写的这两句有没有语法、时态上的错误In my life,Messi is an important person to me.He makes me to like football.His motherland is Argentina.He is a footballplayer.Although he is not tall as other ballplayer,he makes many success in his motherland.He is a hero.Messi in my heart forever,he in everyone's heart forever.l love Messi.l love Argentina.

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我写的这两句有没有语法、时态上的错误
In my life,Messi is an important person to me.He makes me to like football.His motherland is Argentina.He is a footballplayer.Although he is not tall as other ballplayer,he makes many success in his motherland.He is a hero.Messi in my heart forever,he in everyone's heart forever.l love Messi.l love Argentina.

In my life,Messi is an important person to me.He makes me like football.His motherland is Argentina.He is a footballplayer.Although he is not so tall as other ballplayer,he makes much success in his motherland.He is a hero.Messi will be in my heart forever and he will be in everyone's heart forever.l love Messi.l love Argentina.

In my life,Messi is an important person to me.He makes me like football.His motherland is Argentina.He is a footballplayer.Although he is not AS tall as other playerS,he makes many success in his motherland.He is a hero.Messi WILL BE in my heart forever,he WILL BE in everyone's heart forever.l love Messi.l love Argentina.

He makes me like football
Although he is not as tall as other ballplayer
he makes lots of success
Messi will be in my heart forever,he will be in everyone's heart forever.