高手帮我看看下面这篇英语自我介绍有没有病句啊
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高手帮我看看下面这篇英语自我介绍有没有病句啊
Hello,everyone!My name is Li Yi Meng.I am 12 years old.I am a happy and lovly girl.I like animal,i like color,i like food.I love nature.I like stady,and i am good at dancing,panting and instrumental music.I have a lovly family:my father,my mother,and i.I love my family!That is me and my family!
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我会这样写：
Hello,everyone!My name is Li Yi Meng.I am 12 years old.I am a happy and lovely girl.I like cute animal,colorful plant and delicious food.I love nature very much!Every day I study hard.My hobbies are dancing,painting and insturmental music.There are three people in my family:my father,my mother and I.My parents love me and I love them too.