帮我看看2,3句英文有没有语法错误,快

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帮我看看2,3句英文有没有语法错误,快
After I read your letter you told me that my dvd was damaged,then I went to the post office and send a new one.Because I am in China now,so the EMS will take few days to Chicago.Please waiting for that.

最好在第一句的letter后面加上个in which,
send-sent
because去掉
will-may
few-a few(few表示否定,指几乎没有)
waiting-wait