请帮我看看这1句英文有没有问题there are 2essential factors when people who want to sell a company.
问题描述：
请帮我看看这1句英文有没有问题
there are 2essential factors when people who want to sell a company.
答
(There) are 2 essential factors when people (wants) to sell a company.
觉得when改成if会更好.
这句最大的语法错误是when引导的从句不完整,只有主语people,who引导的从句是修饰people的.