英语高手帮我看看我写得怎么样!括号中的是我写的.Hi,Liu Ying,How is everything with you?I know you are going to study in Britain soon.（For breakfast,they eat fried egg,bread,cakes,tomatoes,tea,coffee and fruit.In lunch,they eat sandwich and a cup of coffee.In dinner,they eat beef or fish with vegetables.On weekends,they will begin with soup or snacks,followed by chicken,beef,pork with potatoes,vegetable and so on.You should remember these!）Yours,Wei Hua帮我看看我有没有语法错误.要求：假设你的朋友刘
英语高手帮我看看我写得怎么样!括号中的是我写的.
Hi,Liu Ying,
How is everything with you?I know you are going to study in Britain soon.（For breakfast,they eat fried egg,bread,cakes,tomatoes,tea,coffee and fruit.In lunch,they eat sandwich and a cup of coffee.In dinner,they eat beef or fish with vegetables.On weekends,they will begin with soup or snacks,followed by chicken,beef,pork with potatoes,vegetable and so on.
You should remember these!）
Yours,
Wei Hua
帮我看看我有没有语法错误.
要求：
假设你的朋友刘英要去英国留学并住在英国人家里。请你给她发一封邮件，告诉她英国人的饮食习惯。电子邮件的内容包括英国人一日三餐吃什么以及周末用餐的特点等。
（For breakfast,they eat fried egg,bread,cakes,tomatoes,tea,coffee and fruit.In lunch,they eat sandwich and a cup of coffee.In dinner,they eat beef or fish with vegetables.On weekends,they will begin with soup or snacks,followed by chicken,beef,pork with potatoes,vegetable and so on.
You should remember these!）
改：
（For breakfast,they eat fried eggas, pieces of bread,cakes,tomatoes,cups of tea or coffee and fruits. For lunch,they eat sandwichs and a cup of coffee. For dinner,they eat some beef or fish with vegetables.On weekends,they will begin their meal with some soup or snacks, then followed by some chicken or beef or pork with vegetables such as potatoes and so on.
You should remember these!）
还可以，没有语法错误
1.for breakfast应该放在句尾,.for breakfast,前面应该用as for breakfast,in lunch和in dinner也没有见过这么用的,你可以用at lunch,in dinner time之类的
2.eat这个词可以用于egg什么的,但coffee就不好了吧,建议你用have
3.sandwich可数,sandwiches
其他的都不错,好好学习~