帮我看看这句话有什么语法错误..

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帮我看看这句话有什么语法错误..
There is no sun in the sky in my world,it is always the night but not dark,because there are something instead of the sun.Although it is not as bright as the sun ,it’s enough for me.With the light,I can walk at white night.
没有就帮我改的美一点吧T^T

There is no sun in my world.it is always the night but not bright for the shining of something instead of the sun .it’s enough for me though it is not so warm as the sun ,With the light,I can keep wa...