这5句话有语法错误吗?如何能写得更好啊?

这5句话有语法错误吗?如何能写得更好啊?
5 errors in my composition :
1:from “the Chinese fairy tales” to “Chinese fairy tales”; The reason why I need to remove the article “the” is that in this situation,Chinese fairy tales are not specific but general .So no need to put “the” before “Chinese fairy tales” .
2:from shǒu zhū dài tù to “shǒu zhū dài tù” ; The reason why I need to add quotation mark is that shǒu zhū dài tù is a quotation .
3:from “One day,during his usual work,he was farming carefully,suddenly an unclear thing ran out nowhere .” to “One day,during his usual work,he was farming carefully,and suddenly an unclear thing ran out nowhere .” The reason why I need to add the conjuction “and” is that one sentence can’t have 2 verbs .
4:from“he gave up farming,and just sat in his field waiting for something surprising to send him .”to “he gave up farming,and just sat in his field waiting for something surprising to be sent to him.” The reason is the farmer needs to be given something .In another word ,it is a passive sentence.
5:from“I should not rely on my parents after I graduation.”to“I should not rely on my parents after I graduate.”The reason is there is no verb in the clause of the first sentence .