本句语法不规范,帮我改一下

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本句语法不规范,帮我改一下
some famous scientists who they take much times on their own experiments so as to cause their successful results, because some experiments need a lot of texts to point out their precision

1、who之后的they去掉,这是一个宾语从句,who在从句中作主语,they多余2、take换成spend,take没有这样的用法,一般take用在“it takes 某人 时间 to do sth”3、texts换成data,text是“文章”的意思,不明白你这里想表达...