谁能帮我看一下这个句子哪里语法不规范吗?顺便帮改下
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谁能帮我看一下这个句子哪里语法不规范吗?顺便帮改下
What's more terrible is that the patients who give themselves treatment by using the computers instead of seeing a doctor sometimes might be misdiagnosed and their illness will be more serious,which will lead to the serious consequence.
答
What is worse,the patients,who seek for treatment by using computers instead of by seeing a doctor,sometime may be misdiagnosed ,which will lead their illness to be more serious.