这个英语句子我写的对吗?
问题描述：
这个英语句子我写的对吗?
中文内容是：“张先生告诉我,请你们为我们预留15张最好的门票,我们付钱”
Mr Zhang told me please help us reserved 15 tickets ,We Have To Pay.thanks .
这样写对吗?
答
改成这样会好些：
Mr Zhang tole me to ask you to reserve the best seats.We want 15 tickets and we'll pay for that.Thank you.谢谢你，如果写成，“麻烦你帮我们预留最好的位置，我们要15张最好的票和我们付款，”怎么改呢Mr Zhang told us to contact and ask you for the help. Please reserve the best seats for us. We want 15 tickets and we'll pay for that. Thank you.