懂英语的朋友进来,我写得英语作文对吗?If Linhao go to my home,I will make friend with him,I will playing comeputer games with him,I will playing basketball with him,I will going to surpermarket buy food with him.I think he will having a good time.我的英语作文有语法错误吗?

If Linhao goes to my home,I will make friends with him,play computer games with him,play basketball with him,go to the supermarket and buy food with him.I think he will have a good time.

I will playing comeputer games with him。
其中will后面的playing不对
will后面加动词原形

注意句点的地方，有的你写得是逗号。
If Linhao go to my home,We will become friends.I will play computer games,play basketball with him and go to supermarket to buy food with him.I think we will have a good time。.
错误比较多，你自己对照一下吧。

If Linhao go to my home,I will make friend with him,I will playing(play) comeputer games with him,I will playing(play) basketball with him,I will going(go) to surpermarket 'to' buy food with(for) him.I think he(we) will having(have) a good time
改得都在括号里面

If Linhao go to my home,I will make friend with him,I will play comeputer games with him,I will play basketball with him,I will go to surpermarket and buy some food with him.I think he will have a good time.
严重问题,will后不要加ing,自己看吧