请大家看看下面的有没有语法错误

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请大家看看下面的有没有语法错误
Good morning, sir. It is really a great honor to have this chance to introduce myself.
I graduated from Ren min University of China. Majored in Chinese language literature.
I joined DCB in October 2007, now work at OPS GHS, job is a senior clerk.
I went to the CIQ assistance their work. Time is in 2008and 2013.
I had used to work in the GHS billing office at 2009.
I am a careful, be good at learning. All long, I can finish the work well.
Between me and colleague is also very well. Cooperate with each other at work. In life there are a lot of interaction.
It is clear that I still need to improve myself both in knowledge and abilities, but I belive that with my own efforts, I can be familiar with and prove adequate to the jobyou would give me.

1.China Ren Min University 2.And my job is senior clerk
3.I wen to the CIQ to assistant their work,from 2008 to 2013
4.I used to work in GHS billing office at 2009.5.I am a careful person,and I love to learn.
6.I cooperate well with my colleagues,and we work well with each other.
全部手打,修正了语法和好的word choice
希望可以帮到你.