这句话语法存在错误吧?如何改正?是宾语从句吗?

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这句话语法存在错误吧?如何改正?是宾语从句吗?
some people hold that appearing the re-offending most of people who is set free from *.
翻译:一些人认为出现再次犯罪的大多数是从*里释放出来的人。

some people hold that the appearing of re-offending are mostly people who are set free from *.
that 引导的为宾语从句.
who 引导的为定于从句.