有一话,要怎么表达才最好呢?英语

问题描述:

有一话,要怎么表达才最好呢?英语
语言环境是在简历中
“与十一位团队成员在五个月内超额完成公司所下达任务,为公司创造了更多利润.”
有两个参考答案:
1 Finished above quota task allotted by company with 11 teammates,make more profit for company.
2 Frishing the missions and creating the profits for the company in 5 months with 11 members of team.

第一的答案稍加改动会更好.
Finished above quota task allotted by company with 11 teammates,making more profit for the company.