请帮忙看以下英语表述是否正确,
问题描述：
请帮忙看以下英语表述是否正确,
Thanks for your reminding,we will confirm with Lucy for this shipment.
（我想表达的意思是：我将和lucy确认这票货物）
答
Thanks for your reminding. I will confirm this shipment with Lucy.这样好一点吧,毕竟你应该是用书面语.你这样讲的话口语还差不多.你的句子有两个谓语动词了,thanks和confirm都是.最起码we前面需要一个and.另外就...麻烦请帮忙看下以下表述正确吗，谢谢！ Confirm recieved the invoice and I would provide testing earlier to your next time.发票已收到，下次（以后）我将尽早提供 testing 给您。I've recieved the invoice.Next time I will provide testing to you as soon as possible.