英语高手来帮我看看这道改错题~!

英语高手来帮我看看这道改错题~!
I have a good friend who's name is LiYing.she is our 1_________
monitor and one of the excellent in our class. 2_________
Clever as she is, but she works very hard.We have a3_________
lot on common and have a lot to talk about .One evening4_________
she told me that something happened when her parents was 5_________
out.She was doing her homework one Sunday morning6_________
when she smell something burnt.She stopped to look out 7_________
of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out 8_________
of her neighbor's house. She called 119 immediate.Ten9_________
minutes later,firemen came and out out fire.Her neighbor 10________
was very thankful for her help.11________
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