My heartbeat has been forgotten since your silence.Can you feel my heartbeat?

问题描述:

My heartbeat has been forgotten since your silence.Can you feel my heartbeat?
这两句话拼起来成立吗?
如成立,
如不成立.怎么修改才能令到它成立呢?
我想要的大概意思是.
你沉默这会,我的心也随之而停止跳动了.难道你还听得它在跳动吗?

My heart stops beating when you stay silent.Can't you feel it?用一般时就好 My heartbeat has been forgotten 意思挺明白,但有点象中式英语,英语里不会说forget heartbeat.1楼的silence前应该有动词 对对,楼下...