麻烦英语高手帮我看看哪里有错误..

问题描述:

麻烦英语高手帮我看看哪里有错误..
I am a learner and an ordinary person
I wonder why people have to learn.
I hear learner reading,singing.
Isee everyone learning.
I want everyone succeeds in learning.
I am a learner and an ordinary person
I pretend i am a magician.
I fell happy that help people whit magic.
I touch everything that will be good.
I worry about some people meeting earthquake.
I cry i can't help them when meeting earthquake.
I am a learner and an ordinary person.
I understand meeting earthquake is a miserable event.
I say"oh god,many people lost the life and became orphans at a moment.
I dream everyone happy every day.
I try to help them by donation.
I am a learner and an ordinary person.

很好!