这样的作文能拿几分?

这样的作文能拿几分?
题目：At present it is hard for college students to find jobs. Many people claim that college teachers should give priority to practical courses like computer science and business over such traditional ones as history and geography. To what extent do you agree? Nowadays it is increasingly difficulty for college students to find jobs.Many people agree that new coures such as computer science and business are useful than the traditional ones and college teachers should put the pratical ones priority .While in my opinion ,traditional ones are as significant as pratical ones . As everyone knows, tradional coures like English,maths,history and geography play a vital role in our daily lives , we can get some useful knowledge and gain numerous creative ideas by studying traditional ones .what’s more ,traditional coures make it muck easier and more comfortable when we communicate with each other ,so we have no choice but obay it. With the development of the society , practical courses have drawn much attention .Some people even believe that practial ones are more major than traditional ones .Howerer according to the latest suvey,college students who cant master traditional ones cannot get good result in practial ones either. So it is an undoubtedly fact that if people couldn't master traditional ones, they couldn't adapt to the new ones either. To sum up.what I meant by this is that traditional coures are as essential as pratical ones.Each one should not leave traditional ones behind . Instead ,we should master them and only in that way can we master pratical ones