请帮我看看这一段英语有没有错误.
请帮我看看这一段英语有没有错误.
my feeling strong,it must be come
that you wanna burn like the sun
and i will hold your right hand
i from your mind ,know you want
So I will never leave alone
time goes by ,i still here
比如语法 用词，时态等等
没有啊,你没发上来?你刷新一下这是你写的歌词，还是诗吧。我改一下，如果有问题给我沟通my feeling is strong,it must comethat you wanna burn like the sunand i will hold your right by my handsi come from your mind ,know you wantSo I will never leave you alonetime goes by , i am still herehold your hand，一定需要by my hands吗？ 不可以省略吗还有一个 it must come，如果是must be come就错了吗哦，你是想说我想握住你的右手么，那就是i will hold your right handmust be come......be是动词，come也是动词，一句话里面不会存在两个动词，可以是it must come或者it must be comingmust being come 呢？ 因为coming不押韵，must come 音节不够must being come不行，must 后面只能加动词原形，你写歌词吗？我也是写歌的，听听我们的豆瓣音乐人吧。SPACE ROCKET