some friends i have been out of touch with them for years

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some friends i have been out of touch with them for years
请问这句话对吗,我是根据 the person i admire 这个句型改的

个人意见,欢迎拍砖!
从句型来看是定语从句,SOME FRIENDS 和THEM 应该会构成重复.
这样改下,是否好些?
some friends whome i have been out of touch with for years