求大神帮忙看一下哪段英语表达更好
问题描述：
求大神帮忙看一下哪段英语表达更好
要表达 这世界因为我们各不相同而如此美丽 的话
We are different from others.The world will become so beautiful.
还是
Because we are different from others,so the world will become so beautiful.
哪个更好?
答
Because we are different from others,so the world will become so beautiful.这是个错句的,不能加so.
我们和别人不同（应该是我们之间不相同吧：所以应该说：Because we are different from each other,)
We are different from others.The world will become so beautiful.
应该说：
We are different from each other.The world will become so beautiful.(这句话是中式英语,前者为一般现在时,后者为一般过去时,不太合适的）
我的译文：
It is the differences between us that make the world become so beautiful.
就是我们之间的不同使这个世界如果美丽.（强调句的）