帮忙修改英语演讲稿!My ideal lifestyleMy ideal lifestyle is simple and healthy.As a Chinese student,too much homework and exams make me stressed.And I hope that I will have more free time to do what I really want to do.Such as going shopping with friends,travelling with my relatives,and doing sports.I do sports so that I can study happily with a strong body.Thank you!以上是我自己写的.求各位大神指出语法错误之处并加以修改!若能给予我一些更为高级的表达方式即最佳!
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帮忙修改英语演讲稿!
My ideal lifestyle
My ideal lifestyle is simple and healthy.As a Chinese student,too much homework and exams make me stressed.And I hope that I will have more free time to do what I really want to do.Such as going shopping with friends,travelling with my relatives,and doing sports.I do sports so that I can study happily with a strong body.
Thank you!
以上是我自己写的.求各位大神指出语法错误之处并加以修改!若能给予我一些更为高级的表达方式即最佳!
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