下面这句英语语法是否正确

问题描述:

下面这句英语语法是否正确
在我就职确定后应该做什么
What should I do when I was decided to be employed?

when I was decided -- 错误的说法,很中式英语.
应该是:
What should I do after I was employed.
I did not know what I should do when I heared I was employed.