帮我修改一篇小学英语文章,看看有没有语法,句型,时态等方面错误.这是一封Sunny写给Ann的回信,讲的是他的生日聚会描述生日上的情景使用过去式（老师说的!）但最后一句话时态不确定.其余句子语法也不肯定.信的格式除去,这是正文：I had a good time on my birthday party.Many friends came to my home and I received many gifts.We sang ang danced,Mike did Chinese kung fu.Amy and Ed are playing the piano.John is played games.My parents bought many good food and a birthday cake for me ,we ate a lot.Ann ,I waiting your present,come back quickly please!
帮我修改一篇小学英语文章,看看有没有语法,句型,时态等方面错误.
这是一封Sunny写给Ann的回信,讲的是他的生日聚会描述生日上的情景使用过去式（老师说的!）但最后一句话时态不确定.其余句子语法也不肯定.信的格式除去,这是正文：
I had a good time on my birthday party.Many friends came to my home and I received many gifts.We sang ang danced,Mike did Chinese kung fu.Amy and Ed are playing the piano.John is played games.My parents bought many good food and a birthday cake for me ,we ate a lot.Ann ,I waiting your present,come back quickly please!
很期待可以帮到您,如果觉得不错,请采纳!谢谢!
I had a good time in my birthday party. My friends came over and brought me many gifts. We sang, danced and played games together. Mike showed Chinese kung fu. Amy and Ed played the piano. My parents prepared many delicious foods and a birthday cake for the party. We really enjoyed it. I wish to spend my next birthday with you, be back soon, please!
本人已过专八,表述绝对符合国外习惯,欢迎采纳!你的认可是我的动力!谢谢!