帮我看看 我给一教授的英文信 这样能成么I am really glad to have your letter in reply,Thank you so much for your time and all you have done for me.Because i am work for a art festival here in China those years .(I am the one of the curator),I earn some money from it .so I think I can support myself in the university during the dissertation research time .For the dissertation theme .I think I can write more things and change some place to make the idea more clearly .if yo
帮我看看 我给一教授的英文信 这样能成么
I am really glad to have your letter in reply,Thank you so much for your time and all you have done for me.
Because i am work for a art festival here in China those years .(I am the one of the curator),I earn some money from it .so I think I can support myself in the university during the dissertation research time .
For the dissertation theme .I think I can write more things and change some place to make the idea more clearly .if you can give me some further advice ,I will be very appreciate .
首先。你要注意格式问题
开头结尾有些固定的句子
最好是到网上找一些英文书信学习一下吧
很多错误啊... 你要好好学习英文... 不过你的口语应该还凑合
支持一楼的,找个bug,最后一句 I will be very appreciate .应该是 I will appreciate very much.
I am really glad to have(receive更正宗一些） your letter in reply, Thank you so much for your time and all you have done for me.
Because i am work(working) for a （an)art festival here in China those (these)years . (I am the (加一个only吧，这样更清楚） one of the curator), I earn some money from it .so I think I can support myself in the university during the dissertation research time .
For (改成When talking about)the dissertation theme . I think I can write more things(things 就不用了） and change some place（places) to make the idea more clearly （more clearly改成clear，如果你非要强调“更清楚”就用clearer）. if（If） you can give me some further advice , I will be very appreciate
我把感觉需要改动的地方写在后面的括号里,并附上自己的建议.开头和结尾一般很模式化的,可以找一些直接套上去用.I am really glad to have（receive） your letter in reply（觉得in reply可以省略）,Thank you so mu...